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Angelfish 2005-08-18 . chapter 1
Good job!
Seras Nova 2004-03-18 . chapter 1
All right well, I am so tired, I cannot give you a great review as always...to tell you the truth I skimmed through it...sorry. But I did notice some more beautiful pieces of imagery and I do the whole concept about Mother Tree and such. Sorry...so sleepy...mind reviewing me for a change? Would be nice to see your opinions about my works...
Keep writing.
-Seras
Wasa Chu 2004-03-17 . chapter 1
First off, I'd like to say thank you very much for your critique. ^_^ I'll be sure to keep your suggestions in mind for my next writings.
Wow! This is a great piece of writing! It really flows well, and I love how you've personified the earth and trees. The only thing I would nit-pick at is the lack of transition between the second to last and the last paragraphs. A transition would make the conclusion less abrupt and help it to fit into the story better.
But otherwise this is a very wonderful piece of writing! I like your style a lot; it's very eloquent. ^_^ Keep it up!
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