hey!
pretty good :) tho, being ur best friend and all i guess i can put in a suggestion, personaly i think u could have gone just a bit deepin into the subject... touch the reader with ur words, but otha then that i like it :) (and it rymed too. i kno not all poems have to ryme but i like them better when they do)
Anyways, miss ya lots!

Hi,
This is good. I like how it rhymed. Please read and review my poems.
Thanks :)