wow, that's really kool, i like it alot.i know there are probably many many meanings of this poem for many people, but the meaning i chose for my self was really powerful. keep up the good work.!

These poems are interesting but if you write them in the spur of the moment because you found a word you liked, it seems to me that the poem would therefore have no meaning. I dont see this one relating to anything other than "incandescence" which is fine, but when I read a poem (this is totally my opinion of course) I like to think these are the emotions of the author, etc. so as you can see, I find your poem a little empty. If it does have meaning, please email me or something, thanks.
Cam.