| Reviews for The Person Who looks Like Me |
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Dana 3/3/05 . chapter 1 I get this one, cause well you know why. In a strange way thinking back it probally is an accurat description of some feelings at the time |
Hangman 3/17/04 . chapter 1Reviewing another one of your poems again :P. Umm.. with this poem, its quite good. Actually I cant fault it other than: 1) the subject matter which seems a little vague. Maybe its overdramatized since you talk about anger and crying and all this is about is a girl looking like her grandma. 2) One of the paragraphs doesnt rhyme, which seems a little out of structure seeing as all of them rhyme. Anyway, good work. Cam. |