Wow, this is a cool story, it really gets me in the heart. Please continue.

that was incredible. you have an excellent handle on description and you held the situation with ease. i really like the way you write.
hope you can check out my peices as well.

Painfully true, and beautifuuly written.
Owen

I like it, it gives a differnt perspective on things. I can't wait to read the rest.

This was really awesome. Yesyes. It gave me chills.