At first I liked it, because it reminded me that not every guy wants a girl to be size zero, especially at the detriment to her health. But I thought the end was sweet, when it seemed like the guy actually learnt something from the experience.

insightful, i like the last line...

sigh. the end made me cry and go clutch Conrad's sleeping body. Great ending.I still love your work. :-D

The last line makes me all teary-eyed.Other than that,you write in an exceptional conversational tone.I like.

Short, but sweet.

I had already read this but I forgot to review. This is an amazing story.. If I wasn't -Sara- right now, I probably would've cried, even on the third read.

I honestly thought this had both good and bad parts, Like someones esle said, this story has a good messege, but the guys thoughts were maybe a litte too i dunno "and it was like, man, like," you know. Which is okay, i mean, this is the thoughts of a teenager, but it also felt really unpersonal, and cold, from the guy's point of veiw.

that was surprisingly very pretty because of the honesty of the voice... keep up with that... fiction is grand, but truth is beautiful

No offence, but this was not a good story at all. You need to work on your grammar and capitilization, and you should give it a higher rating. If you're going to post a story, make sure the rating and grammar are correct, or else people kind of get put off and lost interest in the story that doesn't look like it's carefully done. Sorry for the criticism.

Harsh beginning but I guess the end made up for it.

harsh language... but I still like it. Good message; thanks