if this was a real business, those who thought of it would be so stinkin rich...this is very true. lots of people would take advantage of a service such a this. once again, good job.

This is good so far. I like your portrayal of Charlene especially. Please continue!

It's a good idea but is it that hard to use proper puncuation? I'm sorry but it really irks me when people don't capitalize at the beginning of sentences and proper nouns. *sigh*

Genius idea. Really.