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concerto49
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abuseOoh it feels scary and awful. Pain - I don't know now.
Yes, it was rather shocking.
Good in a way I guess.
Anyhow. Cheers.
Through Her Eyes
2004-08-03
ch 1,
abuseAs much as it's depressing, I like it. I like the ab ab rhyme scheme. Usually free verse is what I go for, but subtle rhyming like this isn't bad at all. =D
By the way, thank you for the review on "You Never Knew". Unfortunatly, no, there isn't anymore. It was just meant to be short and to the point. I guess..well..I guess I got what I wanted, huh?
I know this is a long, long review, but I'll finish it with something good. Take care. =D
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