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simpleplan13 2004-04-13 . chapter 1
I like it... i can think of a few different people this can describe... great poem
Dirty Wallpaper 2004-04-07 . chapter 1
ah, this was great. i read it out loud cause i recognised it was more of a narrative poem so i really experienced the full effect. you know, this reminded me of someone i know, someone i wish i didnt know *she is just that evil* - so its a very relatable poem, im sure everyone has someone or something to apply to it. i really loved the line
"And I can't help but know you
Like I'm your mind unlied too"
i thought that was great, just a blow to the face.
wonderful work, im really liking your style. kudos!
P:S - im way sorry i havent emailed you. i got a new email address a few weeks ago and so i havent been checking my belle_subrosa. though now that i realise i have recieved an email from you expect one within the next few days ... heh ... trust me not to realise i may actually still be recieving emails to that email *blush*. anyways, thanks for the review babe :)
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