This is amazing. I find her character truthful and so sarcastic it's funny. I love sarcasm, I use it all the time... not on purpose though, hehe. But it's awesome. I'm going to read the next chapter like right now... great job!

OMG! You updated it again! I am overcome, once again by the feeling of extreme wow-ness... Sorry, and I know that wow-ness isn't a word, but it's good for description. The plot, characters, dialogue, and everything else just blow my mind! I can't wait for the next two chapters!

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omg I so love this story! It's really funny when Brayden and Matt argue and all, and sweet.
Is this the end? If it isn't, I can't wait for the rest of the story!

hey. i loved the story. keep it going. i read the whole thing this morning. :)

Having just finished reading this (up to chapter 15) all I can say is "wow." This story really hits home so far, as, for most of my life, I was a bit like Brayden (and with an equally weird last name... Douglas... I sound like a general). You writing is so good! It kicks the crud out of mine (but, then, mine is pathetic, so don't mind me...) I feel like I'm right there along with her, experiencing her emotions, feeling her pain, and screaming at her for how she's treating Matt... I'll cry if you don't continue!

Alrighty..I think that I already reviewed this but I dont really remember... But I just wanted to say that you have Killer music taste and that because of you, I now know who Stutterfly is... When i first read about them in this story i decided to sheck them out...turns out they are amazing...thank you for spreading the greatness of Stutterfly all the way down here in Kansas...(that is where I am)

i've been reading this story for a couple months now, and i think you are an amazing writer, but i do think that it ended a bit too abruptly...and a few things i think needed to be explained. like problems with her sister and such as someone else mentioned. another thing...and please forgive me if i'm wrong, but it seemed to me that there were a few things in your story taken from the movie "10 things i hate about you" other than that i think it was great and i will look forward to reading more stories that you have written. really good job!

OK, first off, I'd like to apologize for following your story fanactically from Chapter 4 and NEVER REVIEWING. Second of all, I LOVE THIS STORY. Seriosuly, it's probably the best I've read so far.
However, I have to say I don't really like the ending. It seemed rushed, abrupt. A lot of things were left unfinished. Alli's business with Mike, Brayden's on-going feud with her sister, things at school. It WAS a nice ending, but it just left the story semming incomplete. And I'd been thinking (and hoping) that it would go on for another few chapters, because I didn't think it could be resolved that fast.
But it was an amazing story, which I really enjoyed reading, even if I'm not altogether happy with the ending. But hey, it's your story.
If you feel the need to answer or reply to anything I've said here, feel free to e-mail me.
Looking forward to reading more of your writing. Peace out.

That was amazing! It was a great ending but I would want to know what happened after that but still WOW. Very good very good indeed!

*sniff sniff* That was beautiful! I love it, love it, love it! I NEED A TISSUE!
Incredible, original, brilliant!

i think it was a bit too sappy for my liking... but it was good. it would work for an ending, but somehow, i don't think it's the right place to end the story. i don't know what would be the right ending, but i'll know it when i read it. i like your idea of love, it reflects my own in a way. VERY good. i don't think you have as many reviews as i think you deserve, but whatever.

ok.. need more story
.o i love your writing.. and ive been entrhalled with this story..
more please!

i love your story..ive only read through chapter 12, but its kept me captivated the entire time. you are an awesome writer!

YOU ROCK. That was the *perfect* ending. I hadn't expected it to end so soon, and I'm a little dissapointed that it's over, but I think that that was the perfect ending, and don't let anyone tell you different! You are a genius and I love you and I love your story. D

NO! That was the best story I have ever read in my life! I am serious! Don't stop writing! Please write a sequel! That story is so...I don't know...it's so real. It's different then any story Iv'e read because it's so realistic. No one has ever written a story that realistic.