You really write very good. I liked the second strophe very much.
I can email you my poem (I tried to translate it into english) but I don't see your adress in your profile

Wow!
If I ever write a bit like you I'd be so happy! This is so beautiful and I love your title!
Lots of Love, DarkWingedNynmph

wow another poem that blows me away. you are really good. you have some talent here.

Supp Siobhan.. This Is Very Good Aye...!
I Was Feeling Kinda Sad But I Like It Good!