I thought it was very good and very bitter sweet

*Cannot stop weeping*
Oh ... *sniff*... so beautiful...

First off, thanks for the review.
I really like the repeated "the sun doesn't shine anymore" line, it often doesn't work repeating something, but you pulled it off really well, however, I think possible if the last repetition of it should not have the still in it, maybe? now I'm thinking it works ok, but that's just my feedback, do whatever you want with it. Perhaps try and use some imagry to tell what you mean instead of saying what you mean, that always makes me go "wow" when poets use that really well.
The last line is also sort of an anti-climax to me, sort of a hopeless thing, but, since the whole poem is sad, it left me with an almost incomplete feeling, which didn't mean the poem is incomplete, I really like it as an ending.
Great job :) I hope it wasn't too long of a review, I tend to ramble on and on

Very poignant, Anna. More touching writing. Well done! Mel :)

This is a very nice piece. She/he in the moon and he/she is the sun. Without it, all life is lost.

Feels like I'm really there...good!
"Fear is the mind killer..."
Maud'dib- Dine

I love this poem. It's kinda depressing, and those are the poems I really like because they convey true emotion. Nice work...