I can tell you do a lot of thinking and work before posting a poem. There was not one flaw in your artwork. Please continue to write these stunning creations!!

The poem is just amazing. The description is just great. Keep up the good work!

I really like the way you show the reader everything so vividly!
Good Job
~Risa

wow. that was amazing. horrible, in the sense that its about war and no poem about war is going to be real happy, but excelently (dont know if i spelled that right or if its even a word) written. once again, that was amazing. the part about the trenchfoot and then the poppies verses the graves. wow. absolutely fabulous!
great poem. more like that and youll be a true poet (not that i know that much about being a poet, but id read your stuff.)
-lyra-

Thank you for reviewing my first poem, I really liked your poem, it's very eerie.

wow, its really descriptive. Very good the way you brought in past memories of childhood into it as well. Reminds us of the waste..good poem thanks for the review by the way.

War ia just plain stupid. It solves nothing, it just sacrifices good people for stupid reasons.

Overall, this was an intricately written piece. I like how your wove in and out of the narrator's memories. However, I think a bit more feeling could be put in. If you added some stronger words, the affect of this piece would etch deeper into a reader's mind.

Incredibly descriptive (and yes, I CAN tell) for someone from UK. I wonder where you originally hail from... :)
Only one complaint: it lacks rhythm. Try imagining SOUNDS of an immediate conflict, and include them in your song. Just a bit of reallocation will do...
It's a great piece of imagery - but do try polishing it to a masterpiece.
And, BTW... "It's nice" is not a review; it's ASKING for a review.

Beautiful, strong, and very well visualized...I particularly liked the last line, though the images on the battlefield were spectacular as well. Great poem ^^

Wow, that was really good. I can picture it in my head. good work!

Good poem. Great use of words and descriptions.

This is amazing. I found myself being pulled in as I read it. I could picture this little boy and all the things he had seen. Truly excellent piece you've written here.