All of these chapters are so beautiful and beautifully-written. I like how it's just so easy to relate to most of them. Keep at it. ^_^

I love this one the most!]

muaks!

I enjoy your writing style... Again a piece I can relate to. The second last paragraph especially caught my attention. "My emotions, readily displayed on the public stage, needs to be private to all except one. The one." - WONDERFULLY written.

If she looks perky, how can you see her dead tired appearance-it's redundant. I suggest changing the "Can look" to simply "Be".
Other than that, I like this. The narrative writing style is nice.