a little forced in places, but this can't really be reviewed cause everyone has their own way of saying thankyou. i like the line 'you have the power that brightens my day'.. it's a line that could be analysed in the brain, how just one's presence can make someone happy, probably due to the fact that they need to feel happiness and need to find something to relate happiness to ie. a face, or an infatuation, which could well be what your poem is about.

Such a nice thing to do, a poem of thank yous for the people. I read another one like this just... different. As in someone else doing it and it's a good idea, get out the sentiments and yay for friends.

Peace, hearts and cheers.

Jess

Aww, very sweet! I like this. Good job on the rhymes.

I love it. This is beautiful and sincere.

Great stuff. Keep writing. I agree that people don't say thank you and mean it. It's nice to know that some people do.

powerful. nice poem!

Aw carrie! HE'S HERE! AND I CONT WAIT TO TELL YOU AL ABOUT IT!...That'll be tomz...if at all...i might not be on much this weekend...you know why :P

aw so sweet!!:D
huggles!

cool. I don't think people say thank you and mean it enough, nice to know that someone can phrase it so well. In turn thank you for such a lovely poem.