Hey again! This one's pretty good. ~_^ Reminds me of a story I once wrote for a friend of mine, but it was about a noble having to adjust to being a poor orphan...

But we're talking about your story. Iy reminds me of Anne Sulivan {Sp?} She couldn't stand pity.

That was a sad story, Frigyes doesn't deserve to live the way he does. His mother is a terrible person. Excellent work my friend keep it up.~Vortus Mordekai

=) Quite good, a fresh concept. (kinda) My one nitpick: You use a bit too many elipsises. Or perhaps that is a tecnique, seeing as every time the story focuses on the little boy, it ends with an elipsis... (lol)

Good story! Keep writing!

Ta~*Austin

Good story, I hope you'll write more. Poor Kid, I feel so sorry for him.
Just some corrections: "I'm hungry" is "éhes vagyok" in Hungarian, not "éhes vagyol", and there's no such name as Pétar, it is Péter correctly. :-)

Very sad indeed and very real.

powerful, descriptive and leaving you wanting more. old tale of a prostitute and her bastard child, feels true to life at a status that low.

Poor Frigyes. He's got such a horrible family life. v.v I don't like his mother. I'm glad you decided to put this up.

that's really sad:( poor kid...very well written and really envokes emotion! keep writing!