 Infinite Smiles 2004-04-13 . chapter 1I love the whole idea behind this one. Well done!! Very creative and unique!
* I finished the poem on yor pen name, if you want to check it out. |
 simpleplan13 2004-03-27 . chapter 1i love the format and hte idea. but i dunno what youre talking about! |
 mizu no kokoro 2004-03-20 . chapter 1interesting, i lack imagination so some parts were odd~ it waz good!
~Never the same~ |
 lildrumergurl25 2004-03-19 . chapter 1i think that there's only one girl that fit's this description in the world. and that's you. good job jackie! |
 Silent Star4 2004-03-19 . chapter 1This is so good. We all know how guys take us for granted. (Think lunch) Alright anyways, this is really good. |
 pennydeath 2004-03-19 . chapter 1Completely and in all ways perfect. Made me smile hugely - beautiful job. |
 mapofyourhead 2004-03-18 . chapter 1really really niftyy. someone's been watching the home shopping network...
seriously, I can see those ladies going "OOh, and look at the quality of this velvet. All lines are open now for this limited edition timeless classic!"
~Tigress Moon |