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| black*tears*of*innocence 2005-07-18 ch 1,   | i liked this one too. KW! |
| breakme 2004-12-23 ch 1, | It a little too rhymey but it is good. The short lines and a nice effect. Thanks for your reviews on my stuff. Just wondering, how long have you been writing? |
| Miss Ray 2004-04-02 ch 1, | I like this poem, and I like the rythm in it. I also read you're other poems, and I liked Change the most. You're a good writer, keep it up ++Ray++ |
| Catsupracus 2004-03-19 ch 1, | The words flowed quite prettily, in all it was a good poem, I liked the first few lines best. |