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| bansira 2006-09-12 ch 1, | abuseAw... this actually made me cry ;_; So sad and yet beautiful.. I hope Rice, Matthew and the others appear too, and that we meet the murderer xD |
| Stefen 2004-06-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sad! I'm glad to see you did a sequel but I'm sorry, I really don't want Nathan to meet someone else. I know I'm horrible but I have this thing for eternal suffering. :) Anyway, it was really well written. |
| Ilana 2004-06-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI am not going to cry. I am not going to cry. Ok. I absolutely adore this story, especially the first part. I feel sick (that's what happens to me when I'm on yhe verge of tears). You have to continue this. You are a brilliant author! |
| The White 2004-04-08 ch 1, | abuseGood beginning! I loved the tie-in from the original. I look forward to the rest of the story. |
| Liebe Sasa 2004-03-24 ch 1, | abuse~shivers~ Beautiful... Sad, but beautiful. ~Sasa |
| ChickenRun 2004-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI like it so far. I really liked the first part, so I'm interested to see where you take the second. I am a huge fan of your work. I think you write well and only place angst in the apropriate places, instead of all over the place like a lot of writers who write about "issues". I haven't written anything in a while, but I just atared again, and I actually have you to thank. I got an author alert in my email from your story "America the Beautiful", and I realised I hadn't been on fictionpress.com in almost an eternity. And I clicked on the link, and read your story, and decided I would start writing again. So yeah, in a roundabout way, I love your work, and thanks. X |