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| SilentStones 2006-02-28 ch 1,   | I really enjoyed reading this poem. It flows well, and the imagery is very powerful. It's almost as if I can imagine the words being constricted by black crystal wall; a thought helped by the way the last few lines become smaller. Good work, and thankyou for your review.Kayla |
| Tsukage 2006-02-25 ch 1, | Cool poem!...i kinda forgot 2 review...sry...hehe...pls keep writing! |
| Glassed Rose 2004-09-28 ch 1, | That was really good! go you! *holds up peace sigh* you rock! very very very good poem... |
| Lellida 2004-07-14 ch 1, | I don't know what to say. Your poems are amazing and gorgeous. |
| Visions of Harmony 2004-06-06 ch 1, | wow! thats just...wow! i cant describe it...though you obviously can and have! this is such an AMAZING piece!! i feel at some time i could relate to this, like in my past. that is just...*awed face*...I'm lost for words, and it's not often that THAT happens! rozie x x x |
| Decaying Dreams 2004-05-06 ch 1, | Wicky... That is a bit different. I like it! Bwhaha. I love reviewing your poems. :) |
| Mbwun 2004-04-29 ch 1, | Very dark; that impression is reinforced by the use of the dark (in color) imagery. ~He Who Walks On All Fours |
| nine iron 2004-04-29 ch 1, | Hello again wisdom filled Sterces, Nine Iron greets you. I was encaptured by the title here, it drew me in like a jellyfish to a foot. The poems boney fingers reached from the screen and scratched long gone fingernail marks into my heart, where the effects of this poem will exist beyond time. It is angst at its best. Performed, not written. The pleas of the voice in pitch make the lines left by the hand itch. Beyond a review Nine Iron |
| Pandabear575 2004-04-24 ch 1, | this one is so sad yet i understand it and its very well worded...i like it very much...please keep writting ~mandi |
| Razor Sharp Kisses 2004-04-23 ch 1, | I love this piece. Wow...the images - they're so clear and vivid. I love the words you used, the style, everything. It sort of reminded me of a dark bohemian setting. I don't know why. |
| WakeRobin 2004-04-17 ch 1, | Wow, really dark and amazing. I like this the most! Keep writing. |
| Vivian Strong 2004-04-16 ch 1, | oo very morbid but beautiful in it's own way. interesting no punctuation. although i do that alot lol. there are no words to describe the beauty of what you've created its really nice i love it!! Vivi |
| Tetris Queen 2004-04-14 ch 1, | wow deep. and gothic too so i like it. well done |
| Bleeding Ink 2004-04-09 ch 1, | I like this one. The descriptions are really good. And the last three lines are pretty dark, but somewhat true. Good job. this is cool |
| Infinite Smiles 2004-04-06 ch 1, | i LOVE IT.. Your word choice is perfect. I read it out loud..and the sounds ..just sound beuatiful together. The last two lines are so sad, gorgeous in a heart-breaking sort of way. |