This one's very sweet. I kinda got an Arabian vibe to it as well...
The imagery is really good. Well done.

interesting story.. very sweet ending... im sure about the looking to the sky thing cuz that made me think that she was dead... but thats just me

hey, u sorta see the little ball of twigs rollin' by and the sandy winds~ whoo, what an image~ u captured it so well, excellent job^^ keep it way up
~Never the same~

This is awesome, I love all the imagery. I kinda see an arabian setting... Great job.

o. i like it, i like it. you've got some really good imagery. good job jaxie.

I don't find the connection between this and The Distance odd at all, actually...it kinda reminds me of that song too, except this is a cowboy on a horse.

awesome, even with the rhyme (i know! i can imagine the look on your face right now ^_^)...reminds me of The Distance by Cake, oddly enough.
~Tigress Moon