I've been in the mood for poetry today. So, I've been going through various pieces. This particular piece spoke to me. Maybe I can relate to the pleading despiration, maybe I like the ranting feel I picked up from it, I'm not sure. However, It's definitely an excellently done work!

oh my gosh thats something i totally relate to. silk and lace

This reminds me so much of how I feel about my...well, that doesn't matter. I can totally relate to it, and it makes me feel like I'm in the shoes of the you, or whomever you're speaking about. I adore it.

All I have to say is ... wow... that is awesome!

Thats sad...I hope you don't really feel that way. But I still liked it. You know I found your name from a review that you sent to that YourLoverJaneCommitedSuicide...yeah what the hell is wrong with that girl!

I like this, kinda how I feel at times! Very nicley written has a nice flow to it.

Me talented? Not as much as you. Your songs and poems are great. Truly great.
-Jacqueline
P.S. I'm adding you to my Author Alert and Fav Author lists. Ta ta! Lol!

Strong.. Powerful! At first I thought it was anger towards the person being asked to kill the narrator... Then towards the middle/end... It seemed like it was towards themself... "I'm worthless".. And although you're begging them to kill you- I somehow see hope in other peoples situations, and it seems like "either kill me or help me"... i d k! But I liked- super job!

Vivid ideas and deep thought. I love this poem. It is so powerful! You're a great writer!

i really liked this! keep up the great writting

eh. This one is really dark and depressing. I like your songs better, but that's just me.

oh ive had these thoughts before... hate em... hum, well what else i want to say can wait for an email at some point. no need for a review like that... ;) take care guy!

this is sad... i coudlnt kill you... let alone kill anyone... at least i dont think i could... this is good though... nice work

...this wasnt a dumb poem... heck, it was great!... i liked how you are describing what your going through...

OMG I've felt like this so many times... I could really feel the emotion in this... but I can feel it in all of your writing...