 Kaylee Sabrina Green 2005-01-19 . chapter 1I love the first stanza or whatever its called in a song lol! its good keep it upsilk and lace |
 Sang Yu Nung 2004-08-08 . chapter 1At first I was thinking "Charlies' Angels" or something like that. That was when I read the title, but now... nope! completely different!! I feel like that some days, but then I d k y, but everything just turns around and my whole opinion changes. Love, hate relationship SORT OF, except we don't really get hate from Him... I guess "tough love", hehe. nice! |
 Steel Winged Angel 2004-04-20 . chapter 1Sweetness! This is really really cool. I love the dangerous angels. You've got talent my friend. |
 Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-04-17 . chapter 1god dont hate ya, ur unhateable! |
 Ima-Wasteland 2004-04-12 . chapter 1Dangerious angels was written by francesca lisa block. its a really good book you should read it... i think you migh like it... but the was you wrote this... i like... very good...
much love |
 KaseyLovesNoOne 2004-04-03 . chapter 1"I think God hates me,
I think He wants me insane.
Because I asked for His help,
And He gave me bloody rain."
Ok, those were my absolute favorite lines in this one! The chorus was awsome,too. I could actually realte (that's a good sign if people can relate), and it was just overall an great job! |
 pale doll 2004-03-30 . chapter 1I love the title, and this is a really good song. I kind of started singing it, but I don't know what the beat is, haha. Great job dude! |
 Erica101788 2004-03-27 . chapter 1I love this! It's so creative! Your really good at writing I luff it! I don't know what all to say though ha cept it's really good I was singing to it in my head haha |
 rockrockrock 2004-03-27 . chapter 1Wow! This is really good! I love the title, love the whole song! As I said, you've got great song ideas. |
 torn-edges 2004-03-20 . chapter 1gosh you are really talented. nice piece of work, wonderful writing skills you have there! |
 Ente 2004-03-19 . chapter 1oh! this so rocks! *dances around* god i will BUY you a guitar if you would go and get a record company to sign a contract w/you. i love all the softer backround-ish vocals at the end. and how it all adds up to dead. feeling a little melancholy? i am. ^__^ anywya onceagain great song. i will die of shock when you write a bad one. cya! |
 Ainsoph Aur 2004-03-19 . chapter 1pretty good, very menacing. not exactly what I personally believe in, but that's the kind of stuff I like to read, to get a better, more rounded view. keep up the good work bro |
 Princess Alice 2004-03-19 . chapter 1This is a nice song, but, lol, if you really are having problems with "the mighty and powerful god" then you may want to find someone else to worship:) |
 Olive 2004-03-19 . chapter 1 Wow. Very, very nice. The theme is lovely. I wrote a similar piece a few days ago, but it wasn't nearly as good as this. I really don't have any advice to give on this...the only line that I question is in the third verse: it's "To the end of days". *shrugs* This is just my opinion, but maybe it would flow a bit better if it was "To the end of my days".
I commend you on your literateness. XD Very nice. Very, very nice. Ah, forget it. It's just really good. ^^; |
 annoyinghyperrrat 2004-03-18 . chapter 1 I actually have read this book.. its a good song, but if u were to read the book, it doesn't relate. |