Have to admit any meaning of this poem is completely lost on me, but Its good to read though.
Balthasaar

to put it simply... i like this.

Wow! This is really good!
Cancerian Queen

Oh god, I really hope I have reviewd you at all in response to the kind and well-thought out reviews you have given me. I feel horrible that I typically don't have the time (and when I do, my roommate is on my computer) to sit down and RR poems on the site, but I really, really feel the need to read some of your stuff since you left me such quality reviews.

I really like your word choice, and I like the reference to Homer - and interesting author, if I do say so myself. I also like the line about war being the world's wry smile...nice.

Keep writing, please. :)

Namir Swiftpaw

*applauds* great writing! keep it up, i hope to see more of your works.