Wow, the rhyming in this poem was just awesome~ u reli made the whole thing flow ~ awesome job!

I think that this poem is so cool, it's just so like reality.

I like how you take the reader through the thought processes of a person who is suffering. Good work and thanks for the review.

Wow! That was very powerful little piece. I like it a lot because I can totally relate. Sometimes life feels like everythings going wrong... Some of the lines would be good lyrics for a band like Linkin Park or someone... Love it! ^^

wow... i really like this... its very positive... and everyone could use something like that sometime... thanks for the review... keep writing