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| mizu no kokoro 2004-04-27 ch 1,  | abuseWow, the rhyming in this poem was just awesome~ u reli made the whole thing flow ~ awesome job! |
| Honey 2004-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think that this poem is so cool, it's just so like reality. |
| Matthew James Current 2004-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI like how you take the reader through the thought processes of a person who is suffering. Good work and thanks for the review. |
| Feng, the Tears of a Phoeni... 2004-04-09 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was very powerful little piece. I like it a lot because I can totally relate. Sometimes life feels like everythings going wrong... Some of the lines would be good lyrics for a band like Linkin Park or someone... Love it! ^^ |
| pixie sticks 2004-03-20 ch 1, | abusewow... i really like this... its very positive... and everyone could use something like that sometime... thanks for the review... keep writing |