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| kamaitachi^akira 2004-05-08 ch 1,  | abusethis... is great..! a deep suffocating poem. i wish i could take that last step you wrote... cool.. keep writing... |
| Violet Blues 2004-04-28 ch 1, | abuseLovely. -Violet |
| Bamboti 2004-04-12 ch 1, | abusei like this one a lot! *claps hands*. it was a pleasure to read. i wrote one called lost too, but it's different. check it out if u wnat. CA |
| Xenila Poe 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abuseNice, I could really relate. The poem had nice idea assortment and really conveyed emotion. Thanks for reviewing my poem by the way. |
| miraonawall 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abuseAnother awesome poem. A lot of your poetry lets me relate to it. I think you have a gift with words and conveying feelings. Fabulous! :) |
| Amethyst Angel 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abuseNice. Very emotional, very true. Good job. |
| meaningless parasite 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abusereally well written and very expressive but cant help but feel the rhming holds you back a bit. u should try to write a poem in free verse, cuz u seem to have a really good way with words |
| Crazy Arms 2004-04-09 ch 1, | abusegood rhyming schemes... i'd like you to try a new form... basically for variation |
| Word-Waterfall 2004-04-09 ch 1, | abuse*Stares at screen for 10 minutes* *manages to move a tiny bit* Wow, that was smegging AMAZING! jUST WOW *returns to staring at screen in awe* |
| Make me with Beautiful Line... 2004-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI liked how in this poem you ended on a hopeful note. Grammar: i think without is one word. you have it as two. The way you made me feel trapped as well was great. |