Wow, yet another part that has left me speechless. I don't think that whatever I write will encompass my feelings about the work. It's edgy, definately in your face type of thing. Keep it up buddy. :)

A truly heartwrenching piece of work. The stories of Prophet and his friends will stay with me for a long time.
Keep 'em coming, bud...I want more!

Hey, I kind of forgot about the site...
Just read these two, and damn, I gotta tell you. A) You're a great writer. B) Your stories gave me goosebumps. Seriosuly, I finished the last one, and I felt shivers go through me. So sorry 'bout the loss of your friends.

Bravo. :)
A very discriptive piece of work that pays attention to detail. It becomes very easy to envision one's self immeresed in the story and in the very car, almost being able to smell the cigarette smoke. While there are small grammatical errors, it is a work that; given time, could become a great read on a rainy Sunday afternoon. :)
Keep at it Prophet, you've impressed me.
-Isis