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The Light of Earendil 2004-11-15 ch 1,	I just realized that I never reviewed this poem. The repeated "I am a Jew" is so powerful! This topic always makes me so depressed... I love how you add the "At 13, No time for dolls, No time for games But only to stay alive." It shows how most kids that age are out having fun, not being tortured and killed and starving to death. Great job! Hehe, you're a very dramatic review writer. I just read the one you sent me. Thanks so much!! ~Mels
wilderness 2004-10-05 ch 1,	hey that was very beautiful. I am jewish and my grandparents were in the holocaust so this poem was very meaningful to me. usually idisagree with people writing about the holocause, but your was perfect. well done. lani
Saloot 2004-08-12 ch 1,	Gwah. That give me the chills. I shouldn't've read it so late at night. Have you ever read 'Maus' by Art Spiegelman? I've only read Part 1: My Father Bleeds History, but it's fascinating because it's from an adults point of view, not a childs. Oh, and, you spelled 'Daily' wrong
Hunny622XoXo 2004-04-24 ch 1,	what a great poem. the last line "i have value to give to earth" gave me shivers. i really like ur poetry. hunny return the fav
Kathleen-magoo 2004-04-20 ch 1,	This poem is well written and very clear for me to read and understand. You capture the harshness of the fact that this uesed to go on really well. The repeated line, "I am a Jew." works well repeated! very nice! keep it up!
Linden Tree by the Sea 2004-04-19 ch 1,	Awu, another good poem, and sad, too. What inspired you to write it? At any rate, very touching. Please keep writing!
WakeRobin 2004-04-18 ch 1,	This is such a sad and touching poem, especially when dealing with such a tragic subject. I especially like the ending lines, "I am a Jew, I am a human, I have value to give the earth.".
katmonkey 2004-03-23 ch 1,	Wow. Really moving and powerful. Brilliant poem! lime-girl
imxnotxyourxstar 2004-03-20 ch 1,	That's incredibly sad. "At 13, No time for dolls, No time for games But only to stay alive" Strong lines. ~Lsay312
Princess Chloe 2004-03-20 ch 1,	And that is really all that can be said. I have sudied the Holocaust recently, and your poem helped remind me of how terrible it was and how we must never let a thing like it ever happen again. It was touching and I agree it is not discriminating against Jews at all. Because if you think about it, that kind of thing is still an issue, even today, though we'd all like to forget about it. Great job. ~Chloe
writerforever 2004-03-20 ch 1,	Hi. This is a really good poem. You done a really good job at describing the Holocaust. Great job :).

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