Whoa. I favorited this, and I don't do that often. Awesome to read while listening to Black Hole Sun. Actually, it kinda made me giggle. Weird.

That was beautifully poetic, but scary. Really.

That's... Scary... to tell the truth.
Crazy even.
I am never calling the teenage suicide hot line again. Just kidding I never call it.
It's brave though, to see someone die. And kill. Not that I'm encouraging it.

This is, like...the effing best thing I've ever read. No, I mean it. It's genius.

All your stories are brilliant, but this one is genius. Genius, I tell you. You should get some kind of...award. Or something. I don't know. I'm speechless.

Omigod. So, very, very, very creepy. Kinda made me nauseous. But amazing writing, and something that nobody else could do without making it terrible. I have to admit, it scared me. Good job though!
-Jacquie

Holy **.
He went from writing poetry about sunsets to killing people.
...wow.
That was...wow.
-Maggie

Uh, wow. That wasn't how I expected it to end at all. That's just messed up. But written exceedingly well.

god, why are you so brilliant? how do you get these crazy, amazing ideas?

Well written piece. Great job! Good luck with writing, poetry, this story, and life. Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~

Wow, this is so good and very dramatic! It really makes me think and I wondor if it is true or not...*shudder* it is so epic-ly written! Nice work!

wow, that was fascinating, and creepy, and exactly like a teenage poem. this feels insightful :) i like it

Disturbing the lengths he would go to, to get that inspiration. It made me feel sick, and made my eyes go wide so definately brilliantly written.

This is so intense--it's disturbing but the way it's written just pulls you in. i like how you made every action seem so natural and normal, even though David makes decisions that most people would never choose. this was such a great read.

really deep, and so beautiful. your a ** amazing writer.keep it up, dont stop. your inspiring millions.

I have been not feeling so well today, so maybe this one should have come with a disclaimer of sorts. I almost threw up during the description of the first suicide he witnessed. Very Very dramatic. Well written too. (I suppose, not having really witnessed deat). I can't imagine death being tragically beautiful if one kills themselves like that...it's all actually just very sad really. Anyway, despite how crazy he became, I did like David.