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| somuchformyhappyending 2007-12-29 ch 1,  | abusegod, why are you so brilliant? how do you get these crazy, amazing ideas? |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseWell written piece. Great job! Good luck with writing, poetry, this story, and life. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Dalamar's Girl 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is so good and very dramatic! It really makes me think and I wondor if it is true or not...*shudder* it is so epic-ly written! Nice work! |
| mysunwolf 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abusewow, that was fascinating, and creepy, and exactly like a teenage poem. this feels insightful :) i like it |
| Her Wishing Well 2007-04-08 ch 1, | abuseDisturbing the lengths he would go to, to get that inspiration. It made me feel sick, and made my eyes go wide so definately brilliantly written. |
| lastchance02 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is so intense--it's disturbing but the way it's written just pulls you in. i like how you made every action seem so natural and normal, even though David makes decisions that most people would never choose. this was such a great read. |
| ananymous 2006-12-10 ch 1, anon. | abusereally deep, and so beautiful. your a ** amazing writer.keep it up, dont stop. your inspiring millions. |
| whacked 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abuseI have been not feeling so well today, so maybe this one should have come with a disclaimer of sorts. I almost threw up during the description of the first suicide he witnessed. Very Very dramatic. Well written too. (I suppose, not having really witnessed deat). I can't imagine death being tragically beautiful if one kills themselves like that...it's all actually just very sad really. Anyway, despite how crazy he became, I did like David. |
| misfit101 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is great! And funny in a strange twisted way =S |
| girl-23 2006-04-11 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. You are a really good writer. This is beautiful and sad and strangely funny at the same time. Congrats. |
| Frore 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseWow.Amazing story. Very dark, poetic in it's own right; something beautiful. |
| anonymous 2006-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abusedark but strangely beautiful |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was great, i bet you wanted to weird people out but thats stupid, if i wanted weirded out stuff i'd go do that myself because the only way too understand why that boy would do anything like that is to be in his shoes. if that makes sense. somehow this seems like what i do to make poems i write about peoples' feelings and ** like that but i didn't do stuff like that |
| Empty Jigsaw 2005-11-24 ch 1, | abuseIncredible. Intriguing. And basically bizzare. The narrator almost seems sane.Regards, Empty Jigsaw |
| Museworks 2005-03-27 ch 1, | abuseOh, dang, this is *strong*. It cuts straight to the soul. It's dark and bloody and extraordinarily powerful. Yeah, it's scary. But it's also cool. Keep writing--you're a great writer! G. London |