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| E22rin 2004-04-14 ch 1,  | abuseWoah ... that was really good! I liked the rhyming in it. ~*Erin*~ |
| Laric 2004-04-12 ch 1, | abuseTHIS IS GOOD! I like your ending line it makes a lot of sense. |
| Bamboti 2004-04-12 ch 1, | abuseit sounds like u really forced rhymes into that. good theme though CA |
| Lan Jian 2004-04-12 ch 1, | abusegreat poem!! |
| Rose of Darkness 666 2004-04-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, very good. The rhyme thing is really steady in there. I will read more of your poems. PS. Thanks for the reviews! :) |
| The Moribund Marionette 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abuseVery deep. Sorry--I'm sure you're sick of hearing that. I know I am. That's pretty much what MOST say about my work on fictionpress, anyway (i've only been a member since last night). You have a lot of talent. You use it to write great songs as well, I'm sure? Anyway, if you haven't already, you should check out this author: Rose of Darkness 6. She's awesome, and she, in a way, relates to your style of writing. Keep writing--you obviously have the soul for it!! |
| cmetalangel249 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abuseAh I like it. It makes me think of how I felt before, when it feels like you just kind of fall out of control...and you can't stop it. |
| marabelle 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abuseit feels a bit forced-rhymed, but besides that its great! |
| Aeravis 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abuseThe flow is this poem is very nice and it's something many people can relate to. Good job! |
| Eldariel 2004-04-09 ch 1, | abusei like most of your poems. they're like something right up my alley. hope you write some more soon. by the way, thanks for reviewing my story/dream. i'm not used to someone actually leaving comments. thanks |
| Crazy Arms 2004-04-09 ch 1, | abuseEh, this one is kind of choppy. Not my favorite. |
| Anne Turner 2004-04-09 ch 1, | abusehey. nice poem. loved the ending "but i really fell in this thing called life" good job. keep it up. bye the way thanks for my first review! |
| jacobcello 2004-04-08 ch 1, | abuse>HI< I loved this poem. It was great. I like the rhyme and then no rhyme pattern. It gives the poem texture. I'll stop now or ill just start babbling. But really this poem makes you think. Thats good. AU REVOIR JACOB E L L O |
| Cobalt Cat 2004-04-08 ch 1, | abuseFabulous, thank you for reviewing my poem. Your's is utterly fabulous. It's briliant and I'm probably going to ramble about this for a vary long time. |
| Make me with Beautiful Line... 2004-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI liked how in the beginning it was sad, middle hopeful and how the end weighed both feelings in. |