Wow... did this really happen? It seems like a real-life, angsty kinda thing that two teens would do to another. My supposed "best friend" and I just split apart after she invited me over one day and then she cancelled all of a sudden because she had to go to a party with another friend of hers. I know it sounds lame, but she always does that to me!! I never see her any more! Any way, good poem.

This acctualy made me cry... i have friends who have their own sort of group like that, i just hope they don't go the same way Jamie did...

*points to the poem* And that, little children, is why I don't get close to people. I'm the 'Jamie' in my set of three, the one always being left out. It really does hurt. Hence the reason I am distant from my real life. My friends online are a different story, however. I love each and every one of them so much more than they realize. *hugs Bunny* I love da Bunny.

::shudder:: That was yet another amazingly powerful poem. The simple, child-like style you used was eerie in its detachment. Again, this was amazingly well done; keep up the great work!!
~The One and Only

A suiting title for this poem. Flows nicely.

woah. that is really deep. it's so true, so true. being in a group of three best friends is of the suck, because eventually, some one gets pushed out. i like the way you wrote this, it's very touching and really gets feelings through about how sometimes, friends aren't always what you expect them to be. i should know, i've been hurt so many times. sorry for the random thought, but yeah. this is really good! i can't wait to see more of your writing soon!
|Rikku|