Reviews for Peter Pan syndrome

Reviews For: Peter Pan syndrome

a e i o u and sometimes y 2004-09-03 . chapter 1

Okay, it's official, you are going on my favorites.

kt in the sky 2004-07-30 . chapter 1

I son't want to grow up either. :^)

Starlight Maiden 2004-05-20 . chapter 1

I LOVE it. *is a sufferer of Peter Pan syndrome at times* *wait, isn't everyone?*

Impressionist 2004-04-20 . chapter 1

me neither. but i do want to read more of your poetry, because it's much better than growing up. well done.

Infinite Smiles 2004-04-13 . chapter 1

I love it. Great wording. I feel the same way, by the way. Well done.

Meggie 2004-04-05 . chapter 1

I whole-heartedly agree. Nicely done.

Silent Star4 2004-03-22 . chapter 1

Yeah, definatelly can relate to this now, don't wanna deal wit anything...I say we go off to Neverland! Whee! Ok, I'm done, but very good poem!

EveryNowAndThen 2004-03-22 . chapter 1

This is awesome, and I definately can relate.
"correcting grammar and paper-pushing
blurs the vision, and I would
rather chase rainbows
and try to count the stars -
while eyes are still sharp enough
to cut."
I love this part, and perhaps it's because you're experiencing something similar to what I'm going through. Too much pressure is put on young people today to know what they want to do-- I know college is being shoved in my face, I stress out over my grades, I'm 16 and writing term papers on existentialism in Hemingway... sometimes I know it's way too much. I haven't been a kid in years.
Uh, yeah, that's my rant. But this really struck a chord with me, great job.

mapofyourhead 2004-03-21 . chapter 1

I know exactly how that feels. really good job, putting it down in words.
~Tigress Moon

Lela 2004-03-21 . chapter 1

Amen. Care to join my life philosophy?
100-80 Old / Almost dying
80-60 Retiree lots of sleep
60-40 Middle aged
40-20 Adult with loads of work
20-0 A KID!

avidelecteur 2004-03-20 . chapter 1

That's pretty cute. It's a little bit abrupt, but not enough to be a problem.

Amaya Windsong 2004-03-20 . chapter 1

oh. i like it. peter pan syndrome. i think i have an extreme case of it. i get younger. lol. this is really good. i like it.
|Rikku|

Chambered emotions 2004-03-20 . chapter 1

hahaha, I totally agree with you! I dont want to grow up either...it sucks..lol...just please tell me you won't go to neverland ...hahahaha

Juliet Squared 2004-03-20 . chapter 1

Shame there's no real Never-Never Land. I'd like to go there and lead actually lead a happy childhood. >.<
Well said. The ending was a bit abrubt though, but it got to the point. And don't worry if nothing is coming right away; I just had my insane poetry spree after a while of really big dryness.

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