this one wsa good it sound4ed a little repetitive at some points but it was really very good...
stupid typos...o w8...i just realized i hav a backspace button, lol

This is amazing, i really like it, and the whole aspect of the fear of getting hurt again. I love the line "my fragile heart will shatter so easily, by mere disappointment"

Hello. I just wanted to say that I really liked your poem...do u mind if I used it as a song? Of course I'd mention you. So may I please use it?
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