I don't know what to say. I'm just.. wow.
I love that you have two poems in one. Interlaced so perfectly. The imagery in this poem is fantastic. And there are so many lines that cut into your soul...

Wonderful! =)
p.s.
how do you get your poem to show up in stanza's (what type of file do you save it as)?

Interesting style.

i like it very good *thumbs up and stamp of approval* congratulations on a great piece of poetry!