^^ I've been in love with someone and they didn't know it, lol. Anyway, love the fic! Hope to see more like this. ciao

Great story! You are very good at conveying emotions. However, some parts of the story confused me. Is she writing in a diary, or are these just her thoughts? I would change your formatting to convey that. If it is just her thoughts, I would re-do the paragraphs where she is talking about no going to school, etc. Maybe putting dates or something would help. And about the ending...while it is very sweet...does Peter really want to make out with her and tell her how he feels when she is drunk out of her mind?? I would edit it so that maybe all that happens the next day. But, just a thought. I know I just critized a lot, but I am just not very good at telling people what I liked. I really loved your story though, otherwise I wouldn't take the time to write a review.

This was an inspiring story and one in which we all hope for...maybe without the alcohol...but sometimes people need a rude awakening to open their eyes...Wonderful liz...You always were always will be

hey! thanks for ur review :)
this strory is so great & captures the emotions very well.
so, what's a one shot?? cos u kept mentioning that in ur review.. lol.. and any advice you can give me to improve my angstyness? hehe :)

WOW!I read your "modern day senorita" and loved the story,so I looked your other stories up and found this.It is absolutely awesome!I am really new literally I just signed up today because lately writing has been something I have really enjoyed doing.If I ever get a story out,be my guest to give me ANY criticism.It would be a great help.I have really enjoyed reading your stories and hope that you continue writing.GREAT JOB!

hey gorgeous. (its cinda, in case u didn't know) hmm, i had just written this huge long thing about 'you'know'who' that i thought would be better off in an e-mail. dreams can come true, u just gotta hold onto hope, even if u think it will never happen, coz it might, but u never know unless u try. newayz, i am gonna write the rest of my stuff in an e-mail. luv u so much, cindy