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innominate noun 2008-03-02 ch 44,	abuseUm, I almost feel that it's too late for a review, since it's '08 now and you finished this in '05, but I just wanted to say how much I love this. I like your characters a lot, and just the gritty sex, drugs, and rock and roll plot makes me very happy. Your characters just feel very very real, and, you know, that's a pretty big achievement. So, thank you for writing this.
Karori 2006-03-31 ch 5, anon.	abuseI've finished the comic for this story, but I'm trying a new style of comic steup (and I can't seem to get the Spike hair down T_T) so I'm going to redo it. I was thinking of redoing Dissection, but I'm to far and it looks to nice. It's also going to be to long to redo (almost three pages).
WrittenInJello 2005-09-11 ch 44,	abuseReminds me of a cross between Cowboy Bebop and Francesa Lia Block (the latter in the later chapters). Very interesting, goth, urban-y. If that's a word. Well-written with an interesting style, one of the few gems among the garbage on this site. Anita
Stormer 2004-10-16 ch 1,	abuseAw. That was so sweet! What a great beginning. Poor ole Adam. But I am definitely reading on :)
Jocelyn 2004-08-03 ch 20, anon.	abuseFwee!! I always did like that one, even though I only read it once. ^^;; Now all you have to do is say I'm the main reason for the Readman pair, and I won't have to kill you via e-mail.
You'll know who I am 2004-07-25 ch 1, anon.	abuse>.> I notice that your summary emphasizes FICTIONAL, which amuses me. It's good that it amuses them too. :P
Liongirl09 2004-05-15 ch 13, anon.	abuseHey... been quite a while since I reviewed, huh? Sorry... I liked this chapter a lot. Your fic's are better than my U.C.A. Team. But the deal with that is... have you ever seen any anime's? If so, the fic I did was inspired from one called "Meltylancer". The sorty line, setting is mosty like the anime. In the beggining of that anime, it was alomst like I worte. The anime it's self didn't go into much detail. It was like a mystery. Wait. It Is a mystery. But then one night, I sat down and told myself, "Cool and creepy as that anime is, I don't have t omake my fic like that." The only reason I tried to do a fic like that is because when they ended it, it was open. So very open. I tried to finsih it in my fic. It didn't go so well. But some people like how it was done. I perosnally don't... I need to do what you said. Give better desciriton, go into more detail. I think it would help. I think maybe if I did, I could get more reviews. But I don't really do this for reviews. I do it for fun. So thank you for pointing that out. I will take it down and work on it, okay? Then hopefully, the ones who reviewd can see the improvment. I at least.. is what I'm hoping for
Shadow 3013 2004-05-04 ch 13,	abuseI think this is my favorite mini-chapter thus far. I'm not sure why, but I just really, really liked it.
Shadow 3013 2004-03-31 ch 12,	abuseSo... Did he give him permission to sleep with her, or what? I'm confused... I liked the style of this bit, however.
Spazed 2004-03-30 ch 11,	abuseSorry this took so long. Been sick, tired and all of the above. It's getting really good. You should be lucky you're getting reviews for such nice work. I hope you're proud of yourself.^-^
Shadow 3013 2004-03-29 ch 10,	abuseThat's amusing, but sad, the poor dears.
Shadow 3013 2004-03-29 ch 9,	abuseOi, that's tough. That hurt. Great last line, though. I really hope you turn this into a full-fledged story one day.
Spazed 2004-03-23 ch 10,	abuseO! Getting good! Hope you update soon! Cause I'm gonna read em!
Spazed 2004-03-22 ch 7,	abuseThat chapter was good too! Oh and thank for the review for the U.C.A. Team. Yes. I was aware of the error's and currently am proofin them, so by tonight I should have the new doc. up without any errors.^-^ And if the opener was vague with the history of the character's, it should be. For when you get to Code08 Reflections, it will tell of why the charcter's act they way they act and why the became a team. Now I'd better get to class or my teacher's going to kill me! But if I can, I'll get another review in at break!^-^
Toireasa 2004-03-21 ch 3,	abuseThis was awfully sort, but still as strong, and I still like it.

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