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| Dirty Wallpaper 2004-05-15 ch 1,   | AH! FELLOW NEW ZEALANDER! *hugs back* W-O-0-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-T! if you ask me, this site is terribly deprived of us, very rare, species. should be more. germany? flipping aye... anyway, onto the song... "My lies are starting to become true happiness haunts me and all because of you" - wonderful, so contrasting, and so very effective, great segment. "My truths you see as lies believe in me" - when i read that it seemed to have a very soft, whispery texture to it which gave it a very haunting, dark effect. suddenly its black and white. a great song, the only flaw in my opinion was that all the "thankyous" reminded me of Dido, and i hate Dido. but never mind, ill have to get over it someday. great work, kudos! P:S Donnie Darko = a very enjoyable confusion. flip im a dork, im quite sure its unhealthy to be this excited at finding another perosn of the same origin on a website. oh well, no one ever said i was normal. |
| twilight wrists 2004-03-24 ch 1, | why would a poem written about a panic attack have anything to do with donnie darko? i'm sorry if this sounds vindictive but i'm really not in a good mood and i am aware that this isn't a review but it is impossible to reply to reviews without submitting one. |
| Ainsoph Aur 2004-03-22 ch 1, | first off thanks for the review.. anyways this particular song/poem is very much to my liking. i can identify with it easily. i can see in my mind's eye a very soft acoustic guitar song with strings and piano, with your permission, of course, i would love to try to write something to your liking, thanks for your time |