wow - that is wonderful and i mean seriously brilliant. it is probably one of your best, and that is saying a lot. it describes it so amazingly. my mum works with people who suffer from split personality and likewise, i am sure she'd think it a brilliant potrayal. that should be used professionally.

That was really good. I liked how you personified abstract things. Keep writing!

wow another great poem. your poems are like totally bring me down. but the cool part is i cant stop reading your stuff now. later im going to read more.

Hey, its me again. Nice poem you got here, its quite interesting. Nice format and I dont know if its been done before (which it probably has) but its quite innovative. Good job.
Cam.
P.S. You seem to talk about suicide a lot, Im wondering if you're inclined to go kill yourself now... hopefully not.