I'm absolutely in love with youre writing style, this is wonderful

wonderful poem. beautifully written, good rhyme and rhythm, and i love the imagery, language and diction. great job.

i like it.. nice rhyming.. tahnks for your review... taht explanation thing was so not supossed to be there.. I used the poem as part of an english project and forgot to erase the explanation for it!

m I enjoyed this a lot once I got into the flow, which was very shortly on. The rhythm and rhyme fit nicely, and the images presented are very interesting and dark. Ivery much liked the last line; it definitely made me LOL

Hi there...do you *still* remember me? If you need me to jog your memory, I'm a random writer around here who spoke to you a grand total of TWICE then disappeared for six months! Whahay! I bet that really helps!
Well, you *said* you don't forget a lot of people ^_^
Anyway. Nice poem. Like the other reviewers said, it feels really classical. You ever considered taking yourself to see a publisher? Yeah. Classicalish and well-structured, but what I really like about it is the imagery. You're a lot better at this than I remember you being...not that you were bad to begin with...it's just that I've noticed that things change after 6 months of hibernation XP

nice poem
i like it
the flow is very perfect
and i also like that hells bells it is nice and i had reviewed for it months ago
nice poem

Very beautiful...It has the feel of a classic poem.
I finished and uploaded the acrostic poem on your pen name, like you asked me to. It is uploaded under Ch 7 of Acrostic Poems.