i've read this before. You have a strange sense of humor. Bob reminds me of my brother.

The ending is ironically funny, especially considering that the narrator hated his life before. Anyway, I love the way you wrote this story, because once in a while I really do need a break from all of the dramatic and serious prose on this site. Write more soon!

nice but you have to really bring out the feeling of what's happening. Good story though

I love the way you wrote this second chapter! It's insane, but it's hilarious, and the sarcastic little blue chip-stealing English-speaking alien is awesome so far. All right, enough with my mindless commenting...continue!

You ARE planning to continue this, right? I admit, so far, I'm a little confused (but that might just be because I've just done a ton of chemistry problems and I'm feeling a bit woozy). Anyway, this had a nice touch of subtle, caustic humor to it, so it put me in a pretty good mood. Plus, I can relate to Bob, because I'm always secretly wishing I'd be in the center of a catastrophe for once (even though I know I'd regret it later). Continue soon!

Chris! What are you talking about? I think it's hilarious. It doesn't "seem to set up a problem to be solved"...but I love it! (Note: I realize his problem is that he never experiences anything catastrophic first hand) It's really funny. I love so much about this. I have a long list of what I liked, but it's basically just about everything. I'll discuss this with you later, in School or at the D.A. Great work, as usual!
~Kari