Wow. I only got that half-way thru. And that wasn't supposed to be one of the confusing ones. I must be a bit braindead. Once I figured out what you were talking about, tho, I thought the imagery and the whole metaphor-that's-only-sort-of-a-metaphor was really neat. Then again, I have no idea what I'm saying, so don't worry if you don't understand me. I'm going bye-bye now...

hey this is pretty darn good. it's the first poem i've read bye you but don't worry, when i have time i'll read more. very nice.

Agree with the others, don't see much romance...Pretty good anyways, a bit random, but still good. But of course to a poet everything makes perfect sense, but you just gotta be the poet.

I don't see much roance in this, but it's still really pretty. Nice job.

uh...
i don't think that worked how it was supposed to. seemed incongruous w/ summary. some concepts were really awesome, but altogether...eh?
ignore me. i am sleep-deprived and attempting to French-braid my hair w/ one hand. is not working.