love it.

I feel so redundant saying this is amazing and I love it, since that's what I've been saying about everything else of yours I've read so far, but it really is.

Mheh.

You've always been one of my favourite writers here at FP, and I thought I'd figured you out. Granted, you confused me a bit with Time Is of the Essence, but all in all, I thought I knew what to expect from you.

And then you write this story. This story that's beyond perfect, that's pulling me in at full force and that probably won't leave me for a long time to come. I could go on and on saying how much I love it and why I love it and why everybody else should love it, but A-Light-From-Your-Darkness took care of that, and I'm too stunned to find the words right now.

So I leave you with these words: I LOVE this story.

*stares* I-I dont know what to say, this is so amazing! starts off really simple and nice, then it slowly flows to the point of where she starts to let go of reality and into insanity. This represents, in my opinion, the feelings of people who are lonely. first, they think its just a feeling, but slowly they get more depress and then slowly gets lost in their own world, to some people classified as insanity. very well done, AMAZING!
Friend and Fellow Writer,
Lady-in-the-Dark

Holy damn I'm at a complete loss of words for this. It's simply marvelous I mean you've started off very simply and then it starts to build slowly but surely. And the way you make us sympathize with the main character is so amazing, she kept mentioning in her mind that she was not crazy and that made us feel for her, her lonliness or her poor state of mind. The way you built up the character was absoultely amazing and I especially love the way you showed her emotions, especially towards the receptionnist. That was abosultely stunning because slowly but surely it gave an opening for her path to insanity. Then there was her past, her past visits that was mentioned much later on, which only seemed to add to it. This whole thing was so amazingly descriptive I couldn't help but stop for a moment and relish in the picture you had drawn for me. I'm still there, in that white room with the red carpet and the boring old desk, waiting for something else to happen.
The way she escaped her reality to her own little world at the end was sheer beauty. There's serious talent in this particular piece of work. NEVER, on this site, have I seen anything so profound and deep when written about the human mind. I think one of the cruicial points of this was the fact that she barely spoke and yet, somehow, she spoke to us. It was elaborately simple. Her thoughts were what drove her. Instead of just asking the receptionnist where the door was she was convinced she had to find it for herself, and then there was the blindspot where she just couldn't find the door. Times like her patience wearing thin. This all contributed to the wonder of this piece. I don't know what you would do but I hope to either see another chapter of this, somehow, or another version, perhaps a different angle because your grasp on this seems to be excellent and the writing is a pure marvel. You have some seriously great talent here and I love this I'm going to try and put this on my story list, hopefully it's not full, and if it is, I'll make space. This is fantastic, I'm at a loss for words! Take care, don't waste the mind that wrote this, amazing job, and good luck!
Love,
A-Light-From-Your-Darkness

o... that was kinda creepy... but i did like it... it was... um... im not sure that 'interesting' is the right word... none the less, keep up the good writing and review my stuff too plz! luv Mistress xx