Very nice! The feeling and the emotion put into this is so moving. . .'tis sadness, and longing, and faithfulness. . .you did great. *slaps lightly and grumbles* Sure, she says her poetry is no good, and when I see it. . .BAM! I'm slapped in the face with emotion. Silly. It's brilliant!

You've expressed my sorrowful feelings into your poem. I know exactly how you feel.. my friend just got angry today and I don't know y either... It's just.. too.. hard..

WOW! just wow! im going to use this in my movie script!! thank you Beatrice u just gave me a good idea. this poem is A+. keep it up!