That sounds absolutely beautiful... Well done.

Never have I seen such fine use of language! Beautiful, utterly beautiful. It's not hard to tell that you're studying English!
Blessed Be,
Andaren x

*huggles the poem, too* Perfect. It's as if you took the idea of heaven (personal heaven, not heaven idealized with clouds and pearly gates) and fleshed it out for all to enjoy. Slipping into this poem is very relaxing. Thanks for writing it! My day's been so stressful so far, and hearing of home soothed my care away. I should write much, much more... but words fail me. Suffice to say this is the only poem I've ever read thus far that spoke of a desire for and memory of home that I could completely understand and agree with. Very, very well done...

Very good work on this one...only if it were true it would've been better. Oh and thanks for reviewing my work. I e-mailed you. I hope you got it.

I really like this poem. It is really long but it is really good.
*Review for me and I'll review for you :)

::applauds::
Beautiful work, chere.
I miss Naduralin and I can't even remember it. Though I find it comforting to think of my dead loved ones there when I'm feeling sad.
Without cares and worries...gods, that would be wonderful...
::sigh::
Excellent piece, as always.

::wistful sigh:: So very lovely.
I love the clean-washed souls and the new-washed linen and the wildflowers and the rosewater. (There's Auntie Nature taking care of everyone and making sure they are clean.)
::hugs this poem::