I agree with Eirien. Your poem would be suitable for a song. And its very well written.

The title of this poem is perfect for the writing. It just fits.

This is very well-written. Would be very suitable for a song (Gothic/Metal, I can really picture this, wuth the refrain and the rhythm and the longer lines ...) I like this image of "fading to black".
"No one knows, nor is anyone smart enough to figure it out; codes will never be broken"
This is something that often annoys me, poelpe don't even bother to find out what's wrong with you, or they overlook your cries for help because it would upset their values. You've brought that to the point very well.