usually reading the lyrics without hearing music kills it for me...this one however, i enjoyed. fantastic...and so true. ~Mariah

thats good! is it matchbox 20 inspired?great job silk and lace

Great! The chorus was good and the whole poem had a nice beat/ rhythm. It had rhyming in it which makes it sweet & the theme was good! I like the metaphor "you are my nurse" and how you extended it throughout the song... Fantastic!

I'm really loving all the songs. You're an awesome song writer. Extrememly talented.

Love heals all. I love how you expressed that. Wonderful work, as always. ;)

you need a lot of chocolate! junk food helps with the cure for pain... :D or ya can talk to moi! lol

aw... your cure... thats a really good idea... i love it
(makes me sad though because The Cure is my ex's gf's fave band she died not long ago... so excuse me while i cry for her...)

your songs all sound so cool in my head... i wonder if any of them have ever been made, and if so, where can i hear them?! lol, great job, as always!

Wow... that was well written! I could feel the emotion and I loved the way you presented your idea in this piece!

I really love this, I can relate so much. I started singing this one out-loud too! Too bad you can't post sheet music on this site! Another great job!

I think you've got great song ideas. I love the way you write, especially the chorus..I've sorta got a tune with your lyrics stuck in my head now..lol..keep up the great work!

your song rocks i love it i really enjoyed reading it...well im not good at reviewing lol so dont mind my crappy review well anyways i like ur writing and ill continue to read and review ur stuff thanks

hey
this is...god i'm running out of words to describe your stuff. how many words are their that mean the same thing as awesome? *ticks off fingers* great, amazing, excellent, incredible, nice, super, stunning, wicked, brilliant... okay, im at a loss for anymore. Anyways, this one checks off in every category. so yeah i like...especially the second verse. real good. T_T man it's not fair that you can do this. wish i had your gift for writing songs. ^__^

pree-tay! ehm... i'm back again. another wonderfully written one. ahh! i'm jealous.