ohh, I like this poem very much. I think anyone who's been in love for more than a week probably knows this feeling well, and you're good at conveying that voice of desperation without making it seem annoying.

I would like to give some criticism though, just because I'm harsh like that and pick through gritty details all the time.

I'd like there to be a little more depth. This poem definitely tells a story, so I'd like you to hint a bit more at the background of the person speaking, or maybe just add a bit to it. I find the funnest part about poetry is you can cram as much meaning as you like into as few words as possible. That's all, though. You're a very talented writer. :3

i know how you feel liked it