I can't help but picture this as drowning in someone you can't help but wanting even though you know you really shouldn't want them. Am I being confusing again?! Eh, it happens. Well this was seriously well written and I really REALLY like it. It was deep, though provoking, you know the drill! =P Okay, reviewing your work is sucking ALL the creativity out of me...I must go now! Take care, great job, and good luck!
Love,
a.twisted.soul
~by now you should know who I am~

I like the alliteration at the beginning. The whole thing flows very nicely, and I really like it. good job. it's definitly going on my fav. list.