Absolutly lovely poem. Great imagery, magnificent description, and an amazing idea to spring off of. b^.^d
-Amber

omg i still love your poetry! this was beautiful and really deep. loved your imagery ... and everything was obscure, yet when i thought about it, it was all really true and really clear. you've got amazing vision. =D kudos keep it up. would you mind checking my poetry? it's all combined on "from the inside" plz?? =) write more poetry you're so good at it
~k8