|Reviews for Searching|
| insert name here 3/22/04 . chapter 1
wow, i really like it, great job, u should consider writing a melody to it, this piece definatly has song potential
| Frogalog 3/22/04 . chapter 1
i love the way it flows.
| BoldSilence 3/22/04 . chapter 1
This could definately be a song. I really like the chorus, espcialy this.
"Now I'm sarching for the answers
At the bottom of a bottle
But I'm getting nowhere
My life feels swallowed"
That was a really cool line.
R&R some of my stuff if you will...